Donler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Kriz & F-777] - Taken]

You asked for it, so here's my review.

You asked for my opinion so I thought I'd listen to it a few times through and tell you what worked well and what could use a bit more work:

Intro :35- I like how it didn't start out boring like many dance/trancee songs, yet it left somewhere to build to

:35 - :50 Good synth part. Very catchy.

:50 - 1:06- Synth still sounds good but I feel like its more of an alarm clock at certain pitches. (I haven't tried it, but maybe a dramatic octive switch?)

1:06 - 1:33- Nice transition, I especially like how you introduced the 16th notes with the quick low-high-low part. It makes this piece unique.

1:33 - 1:45- Newgrounds isn't to this level yet, you amaze.

(1:45) - I can't tell if this not is skipping and its a low quality version or if you just are playing the same note really quickly. Sounds kind of like a skip. Check it out.

1:45 - 2:02- Beautiful

2:02 - 2:25You might want to bring in the drum part in 2:08 instead of 2:11, the off-beat sounds great but very difficult to dance to. Maybe offer something quiter but on-beat at the same time?

2:25- 3:05Everything falls into place.

(2:40 - 2:58) When I was listening to this song I heard a police siren outside my window and it sounded kinda cool with the music. Slow, quiet, and occerred about every 4th beat. It was really pretty cool.

3:05-End The Echo sound becomes most prominent 3:10-3:15 but you could actually make it a lot louder for a more duel-like sound. Battling audio is always good. Good note structure, use of appropriate repetition between the High-low-high-low echo parts.

Overall, bravo! Thanks for letting me know you had a new release. Keep me posted! +1 for my collection. =)

Kr1zF-777 responds:

fantastic review!! thx for all the comments, this will help us become (even) better
thank u so much for ur time, we owe u one! ^^