Donler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lackadaisical Cohort - Part 2]

Question for you

I can't say I'm a huge fan of the trip step+daft punk voice+dance influence but I can tell you're really good at what you do from this. I am wondering how you learned to write. I've tried writing with ProTools and Ableton Live. Granted I don't take the considerable time to learn everything. I've only spent maybe 60 hours between the 2 programs, but I was wondering what program you use and if you used any tutorials/where to find some. Keep producing. I look forward to see what you come up with next.

-Donler

InvisibleObserver responds:

Answer for you.

60 hours is probably the total time I would spend on 6 or so songs (on average). 60 hours is very little time investment, while it would be enough to allow basic understanding of the hosting software, its not enough time to become skilled with the software, nor is it time to let ones abilities become defined in any manner.

I've learned to write with a lot of experimentation and trial and error, and a basic background in music theory. My style of writing is relatively unique in a sense that I attempt to avoid cliche's and well known convention. This song isn't the strongest example of that, but theres a lot of sound creation and manipulation I've done that helps set this apart from others.

I'm using FL8 studio and this songs made up primarily of a free VST known as alieno, another free one called Protoplasm and a paid for one called Vanguard. Rest is samples and some other dinky synths,

I do not refer to tutorials, most people with FL making the tutorials hardly know what they are talking about. The one you will find on youtube are basic and often not the most efficient ways of doing things (I look at them for fun to pick out the flaws), they will provide basic information to stop you from feeling trapped in with the softwares limitation, however they will not give any magical insight. If its necesssary to rely on tutorials after knowing the core functions of a DAW in order to create music or emulate someone elses style, frankly its not a worth while endeavor. May seem a bit conceited, but that is the common trend. There is the rare gem of a tutorial actually imparting important non simplistic information.

Most of this comes with time, as is most things.

If I've missed anything in my 2am rambling, just PM me, I'll clarify. :)

[(WF1) F-777- Phantom (Fin]

Here's my critique.

8/10 +1 for originality, so I think you earned a 9/10. Here's my critique.
The heartbeat you had before :50 seemed a bit dull. Try using a different sound or modulate it so it sounds more definite, clear. The riff going on around 1:35 sounded very good. 1:57 should probably be slowed down by about 5 bpm or so to fit with the prior part as well as give you the emphasis on the following section that you're looking for.At 2:13 you should consider going back into the full orchestra just like you had at the beginning and then give a drop ride to the part you placed at 2:13. It would give your song the length that it just falls short of. The ending sounded very abrupt and didn't give the feeling of 'epic continuation' like the music could go on forever. I know you are good at that, as you have done so in many of your other pieces.

At least consider my recommendations for a remix or similar future work. Hopefully it can help. It sounded really good and your originality and variety continues to amaze many people whom visit the audio portal specifically for you.
Great job overall, oh and I almost forgot, your modulation at 1:07 was Very Nice.

Have a good one as always,
Donler

wyldfyre1 responds:

Heh i'm not sure we'll be doing a remix of this track but i do like the idea's i MAY try some of this just to get a new outlook on it =) Thanks for the review as always and i'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Sting - F777 challenge]

Interesting, not your usuial.

The background "drum/symbol" part is really solid. But I feel like the piano is lacking a climax, for some reason I feel like it should have one even though it is a rather repetitive part because it sticks out to the listener. If you don't want to make a climax part to it then I would recommend playing around with what key it's in.

PS: You're going to see my work up on the Audio Portal soon under [SMOS] so I hope you take the time to review it too. Have a good one, and i'll be looking for your next submission. GL!

Blasphem-E responds:

If I see it, I'll be sure to drop a review for sure man. Thanks for the look out, and I've got a bunch of stuff you can check out if you'd like to

[Dj Otherworld - Happy Core]

good song - tips from a musician.

I love your method. I feel like you're not really giving it your all though. You could definally add another line in with the other major themes within the song. Once you can alternate in complexity and dynamics then you can be the king of the audio portal. Keep workin' hard. You've got this.

raretools responds:

Thx :D just keep in mind that I was only 14 when i made this song. it's one of my first

[[Kriz & F-777] - Taken]

You asked for it, so here's my review.

You asked for my opinion so I thought I'd listen to it a few times through and tell you what worked well and what could use a bit more work:

Intro :35- I like how it didn't start out boring like many dance/trancee songs, yet it left somewhere to build to

:35 - :50 Good synth part. Very catchy.

:50 - 1:06- Synth still sounds good but I feel like its more of an alarm clock at certain pitches. (I haven't tried it, but maybe a dramatic octive switch?)

1:06 - 1:33- Nice transition, I especially like how you introduced the 16th notes with the quick low-high-low part. It makes this piece unique.

1:33 - 1:45- Newgrounds isn't to this level yet, you amaze.

(1:45) - I can't tell if this not is skipping and its a low quality version or if you just are playing the same note really quickly. Sounds kind of like a skip. Check it out.

1:45 - 2:02- Beautiful

2:02 - 2:25You might want to bring in the drum part in 2:08 instead of 2:11, the off-beat sounds great but very difficult to dance to. Maybe offer something quiter but on-beat at the same time?

2:25- 3:05Everything falls into place.

(2:40 - 2:58) When I was listening to this song I heard a police siren outside my window and it sounded kinda cool with the music. Slow, quiet, and occerred about every 4th beat. It was really pretty cool.

3:05-End The Echo sound becomes most prominent 3:10-3:15 but you could actually make it a lot louder for a more duel-like sound. Battling audio is always good. Good note structure, use of appropriate repetition between the High-low-high-low echo parts.

Overall, bravo! Thanks for letting me know you had a new release. Keep me posted! +1 for my collection. =)

Kr1zF-777 responds:

fantastic review!! thx for all the comments, this will help us become (even) better
thank u so much for ur time, we owe u one! ^^